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Big thanks to A Almulla for contributing with these great hints for writing critique! If you follow these guidelines you will surely get a lot of awarded comments in curation which means +20 points and the chance to reach the highest levels.
What is critique?
Critique is not about only finding fault in an image. Its about looking at an image and deciding whats good and whats bad about it. Keep in mind what you write is "your" opinion and what is wrong for you can be right for many others.
As such I find images fall under two categories
The main emphasis is “good elements.” If you see a bad picture and can’t find the good elements thats your fault, not the photographer’s, his fault was including more bad elements. So when you critique include whats good. Actually start with whats good.
My approach has three parts which I loosely follow. It helps me to have a structured approach and after a while I just go through them without thinking twice, it just becomes natural.
Even with this list I'll write whats good first. Everything good about technical aspects and composition. Once done with those I'll write what I feel looks wrong. So it ends up looking like this:
Good technical, good composition aspects. Then what needs fixing in technical or composition.
Technical Aspects:
Impression:
This is the toughest part and its here where your comment will shine. The technical aspects and composition will help in conveying your impression. If something was off in the technical or composition parts it would be a good time to suggest them. After writing everything thats good I start a new sentence with something like "However I think you could improve on" or "Yet I feel" and state what could be fixed. Take the circumstances the image was taken in. Asking someone to go right or left while on a ledge is stupid. If the image was taken at the South Pole and you suggest the photographer should move here or there well he may not have another chance to get there. YOU may never go there. Be rational.
An image may have everything right about it and be bad and the other way round is true. A few pictures have so many faults that they all work well together.
Not all pictures tell a story. A photograph is just that, a photograph. A macro shot of the head of a housefly can look great for all the detail and colour but may not have a story.
A common shortcoming is interpreting mood. The sensation you get when seeing an image. Did that picture of a giggling baby make you happy? How about that picture of war, did it make you angry or mad ?
Did you like the picture or not ?
Close your comment with something constructive. I'd love someone telling me I did something wrong then gives me a pat on the back for doing something right. Wouldn't you?
''Do we have to make [a] critique for curating?''
Only if you choose to contribute something that might be of value to the people submitting images.
"...where I explain why I think the curator's comments [as part of] voting is unnecessary"".
What's so: The people that run the site deliberately set it up to reward useful commentary or a valued critique. Unless you contribute something that is valued (by the rating system controlled by others), one can't advance up through the ranks of curatorship.
Since the commentary section is intentional, I would assume that is an expression of what this site is about; i.e. learning and growth as artists. I am squarely in the camp that values such contributions. Besides, why is it valuable to only guess at the mysterious criteria that is used to select images from a bunch of isolated people with vastly divergent thoughts, philosophies and approaches? Personally speaking, voting in isolation seems a odd thing to do rather than openly learning from each other so that we can learn and grow as artists.
I would suggest that it is all too easy and comfortable to define what our approaches are and to freeze those assumptions, to hang onto styles that feel good and all manner of cluttered ideas that we don't like challenged. We are hard-wired to want comfortable patterns of existence in order to safely predict the future; one of the many impacts of that is that results in copying what is popular or trendy which usually feels great because that too is a pattern. That may have been very useful back when we were cavemen to help us survive, but they are now obstacles to artistic learning and growth. One of the most valuable aspects of this site is the vastly different views, insights, distinctions, concepts and principles that are presented and discussed. I have had my assumptions tested and had to distinguish new concepts and insights to refine visual principles to explain what I'm seeing and to understand what the inputs really meant. In that process I eliminated many things that I thought were useful, but weren't, and I was able to test out new insights that are far more valuable to me.
Many will crave rules and traditional systems because they impose order or are comfortable; but that too is an obstacle and limitation to transformation, innovation, creativity and growth. As messy as an international debate is, I'm all for the benefits. We are now in a new age of social media without physical boundaries were rapid evolution is the norm. I'm excited to see where this all goes and believe that the synergy of contribution from everyone is greater than any one contributor. And I look forward to being challenged and having things shook-up along the path; what good is a believe system, philosophy or approach unless it is ruthlessly tested? ;-]
There are some issues to debate and resolve here.
I found the hints for writing curation comments admirable to start a conversation on the subject and I'm all for testing and debating concepts, principles and approaches.
The hints list is similar to many other attempts I've read on the web to list whatever it is that we should consider; all good stuff. But it's ''conventional wisdom'' it doesn't go far enough and here's my thoughts on the matter.
If one were to take the majority of the very nice images that get submitted here (on the most premier photography web gallery on the planet), then run them through the list as a filter then most all of them would be admitted.... then the place would be clogged with way, way too many images. Then it wouldn't be a premier gallery anymore. Here's the basic challenge: Several years ago, I read that there were 58 billion images posted and shared on the internet that year. The number is growing rapidly too. That is a mind numbing 1,600 to 2,000+ images a SECOND! That is a tsunami of images by any measure. So we need a new and deeper set of insights and distinctions to boil down what gets admitted and to explain why so few but exquisite images actually get published here. After getting many of what I believed to be my own 'damned good images' shot down (without any explanation which was maddening when I can't learn why) I then set about studying and trying to distinguish what could be learned with the goal of being able to use and apply those concepts to further the artistic or expressive power of my own imagery. Here's an overview or summary of what I think are useful insights and distinctions.
The images that get published are either UNIQUE or an ORIGINAL INTERPRETATION of things that are not unique.
That is probably the most vexing and challenging characteristic to wrestle with for any artist and as far as I can tell the final images have those characteristics in spades. It also quickly filters out a huge number of images. Given the tsunami of imagery out there generated by biggest number of photographers in history it is also one of the most important to consider given that it is human nature to mimic and copy each other as we are so attuned to the pattern of what is popular and ''cool''.
I will emphatically say that ''good'', ''bad'' ''right'' or ''wrong'' are not useful concepts, ever. What is useful is to focus on what is more expressive. That endeavor drives my thinking and I've given it a lot of thought, diving deep down the rabbit hole on that one to find things that are useful.
''What's so'' is that there is a tsunami of images and perhaps even a majority could be said to be ''beautiful'' or 'pretty''. But is that sufficient for the galleries? No, otherwise the place would be clogged with the 'merely beautiful' images that can also be vague. What is more engaging, compelling and inspiring is to tell what I've come to refer to as a ''visial story''. In the simplest form it requires clarity of concepts and to be aware of what one is trying to actually express. The basic components are to have very well defined and clear primary subject that has a RELATIONSHIP to it's supporting context. That works well for landscapes and environmental portraits. Many images have poorly defined primary subjects or context and both are needed to be optimally expressive.
Every image needs a clear frame of reference so that we can understand it. The most basic is to be clear about the genre so that we can begin to interpret what we are looking at. The reason is also that different genre have different criteria for what makes them expressive. Abstracts for instance seem to be judged purely on their compositions at the expense of all the usual criteria that could be applied.
There are a list of things that I will dig into that most comfortably fall under the category of composition. What most don't seem to understand is that the composition is one of many ''expressive strategies'' to support the expressive vision or intent. And that it needs to be based on a deep understanding of how our perceptions work.
Then there is the concept that the images that get admitted to the galleries are essentially free of distractions, another way of saying that they are practically flawless. That then digs into what exactly is distracting? As an example, ''Perceptual order'' is a principle that needs to reinforce the intended expression and what the primary subject is. This is a deep subject by itself.
Each of those areas are worthy of exploration, debate and to distinguish what the principles and concepts are. I'm a big believer of focusing on concepts and principles with the goal of developing a toolbox for artist's to use. It is a ''visual language'' and without language we are just blundering about with trial and error. Concepts occur in language. When out shooting that is managed by the visual/spatial parts of the brain that have absolutely NO language. There is a massive disconnect in that and it also explains why photographers struggle so hard to even talk about what we do with much clarity or common understandings. I would propose that we be clear about concepts and use that to drive our expressions rather than trying to apply them after the fact. That hold a great deal of potential to enable us all to improve and grow as artists.
Cheers,
Zane