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Wright Library - Princeton Theological Seminary - EYP Architects
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Patrick Compagnucci PRO
1 year ago

Hi all,

 

Took this image a while back and have been working to try and improve it.  I was wondering what you folks thought regarding composition, and color.  I am not crazy about the sky and was wondering what you all think, and if you have any overall suggestions for improvement.

FL 27, Expo 1/200, F13, ISO 100.  Photoshop 24 and Nik collection softwrae.

 

Kind regards,

Patrick

 

 

Theo Luycx PRO
1 year ago

Patrick,

I played a little bit with your composition. Not much better but a better sky I think. I did following: Cut out with a little bit greater format. From right below to left above but more with FILL WITH CONTENT. Now there is the possibilty to make a small change in composition. And I changed the color of the sky a little bit. Below my suggestion. But only a change of the sky is also a possibility. Give in selection, select air and go in photoshop to COLORTONE/SATURATION go for color blue and use the upper sleeve or also second one. Theo L.

 

 

Edited: 1 year ago by Theo Luycx
Patrick Compagnucci PRO
1 year ago

Hi Theo, thenk you for your excellent suggestions.  I will impliment the accordingly.

 

As always, warmest regards,

Patrick

Arnon Orbach CREW 
1 year ago — Senior critic

Dear Patrick,

 

As always, good to see you on the Cirtique forum.

I upscaled your image X2 to get more details in Topaz photo AI. I also changed the sky color to a lighter blue. Regarding the composition, I took your image to Photoshop, trying to center the main object and straitgen it to be parallel to the base line.

I added  abit of the image on both sides so it will be centerd using Photoshop beta to fill the missing areas.

 

I hope you will like it.

 

Warm regards

Arnon Orbach Senior Critic

 

 

Patrick Compagnucci PRO
1 year ago
Arnon Orbach CREW 

Dear Patrick,

 

As always, good to see you on the Cirtique forum.

I upscaled your image X2 to get more details in Topaz photo AI. I also changed the sky color to a lighter blue. Regarding the composition, I took your image to Photoshop, trying to center the main object and straitgen it to be parallel to the base line.

I added  abit of the image on both sides so it will be centerd using Photoshop beta to fill the missing areas.

 

I hope you will like it.

 

Warm regards

Arnon Orbach Senior Critic

 

 

Very Interesting  edit Arnon.  Something I would have never thought of.  I like it a lot..  thanks for taking the time to work on the image.  Best regards, Patrick