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Dr. Patel,
Thank you very much for sharing this photo, and the story of the Roha fort with us here in Critique. Thanks also for including the exposure settings. It's useful to know the aperture, shutter speed and ISO for an unusual lighting situation such as this. Your stars must be very bright there. The times I've photographed the Milky Way I've used 20 or 30 seconds at f/2.8 and ISO 3200 - so about 2 stops more than your exposure.
We can't say why the photo wasn't Published. Those decisions are made by the Head Curators, and they are unable to write to each member with an explanation. Sometimes it's just that there are too many similar photos on the day yours was judged. Milky Way photos are getting to be more common, so the competition is tough.
Having said that, I'll offer my best guess. I think the photo is much too light. It is a night shot so should be much darker. You may have wanted to show the fort clearly, but that might be best done with another photograph made in daylight hours.
I hope you don't mind that I made a screen capture and edited it darker and cooler in colour. I thought it looked more mysterious and ancient that way, half hidden in the shadows. I also retouched the graffiti as it seemed disrespectful to put one's initals on a building of such historical importance. Surely it is in disrepair, but graffiti makes it worse, not better. In my opinion.
. . . . Steven, senior critic
Steven T I could have not done any better Great Critique and an Awarded Gold Cup 🏆🏆🏆🏆🏆- Congratulations
Thank you very much Steven T, Danniel Springgay, and Johanus Januar for your valuable time and inputs.
Hi Dr. Hitesh Patel,
Thank you very much for posting your photo on this forum. You described the history of this place and the way you photographed beautifully. Thank you very much for showing us a beautiful historical place.
I will offer you my look at this place and your photo. For me, this place is a storm of colors, dynamic moments, light and wild untamed nature. Therefore, using Camera Raw in PS CC 2022 I increased the colors and dynamics of the photo. In addition, I locally "illuminated" the interior of the building, a fragment of the tower and the road in front of the building. Now it seems that this structure lives with the colors and power of starlight.
Of course, this is my suggestion for your photo.
Kind regards
Slawomir Kowalczyk - SC.