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Hello, I am hoping to get some advice from you.
I wanted to draw attention to the eyes and expression of the subject woman, so I shot with a low Focal Number.
At the same time, I thought I could express the softness of the petals, which is the subtitle of the photo.
This photo was not selected, but I have no idea why.
Please let me know anything that could be improved.
If there is a simple reason why it was not selected, I welcome your comments.
Nikon Z8 / Nikkor Z 24-70mm f2.8 S
70mm F3.2 1/250s ISO2200 0EV
Processing tool is Evoto.
Hi and welcome First may I say what a wonderful model and pose Wow so relaxed and looking amazing. For my eyes and judgement I would have preferred the whole face sharp eyes, nose and lips aslo a small crop off the left to take away that distracting highlight. I hope this helps... Thank you for sharing.
Hello, I am hoping to get some advice from you.
I wanted to draw attention to the eyes and expression of the subject woman, so I shot with a low Focal Number.
At the same time, I thought I could express the softness of the petals, which is the subtitle of the photo.
This photo was not selected, but I have no idea why.
Please let me know anything that could be improved.
If there is a simple reason why it was not selected, I welcome your comments.
Nikon Z8 / Nikkor Z 24-70mm f2.8 S
70mm F3.2 1/250s ISO2200 0EV
Processing tool is Evoto.
Hello nightview_____ and welcome to the Critique Forum.
I too was impressed by this beautiful model and close up portrait, Her expression is very vivid and alluring.
I am not a portrait photographer so I cannot advise you on that aspect, except that I agree with what Daniel said about the sharpness that is lacking in part of her face. Personally, I also think that it might have been better if the purple/blue hydrangea would have also been in focus because it is right by her face.
So all I did was to skew the image a little to get rid of the distracting black post and the flowers showing in the far left. Then I crop the image to get rid of her fingers, which I didn't think were a useful element in the photo.
I hope these points are helpful to you.
Best regards,
Lucie, s.c.
