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爬刀梯 Knife ladder
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Xiao Ping PRO
2 years ago

"Climbing the ladder (a ladder made of knives) is one of the traditional folk customs in Zhanjiang, Guangdong, China. People use this activity to show bravery and also to pray for blessings."

L1D-20c  28mm  F5.6  ISO:400   1/640 s

I hope you can give your professional opinions on color, composition and later stage. Thank you

 

Slawomir Kowalczyk CREW 
2 years ago — Senior critic

Hello Xiao,

 

thank you for uploading your picture to this forum.

Congratulations not only on the publication of the photo, but also on the fact that the photo was awarded!

Nevertheless, let me make a few observations that may be taken into account in the next frames.

I feel a little sorry for the cut flags, which - apart from the main theme of the climbing daredevil - are probably an important element of this celebration. In addition, if you could slightly turn the camera - drone to get better symmetry in relation to the ropes supporting the structure, it would give even stronger perception of the image.

Once again, congratulations on the publication and, above all, the photos.

 

Regards

 

Slawomir Kowalczyk - SC.

Xiao Ping PRO
2 years ago
Slawomir Kowalczyk 船员

Hello Xiao,

 

感谢您将照片上传到本论坛。

不仅要祝贺照片的发布,还要祝贺照片获奖!

尽管如此,让我提出一些可能在下一帧中考虑的观察结果。

我对剪下的旗帜感到有点遗憾,除了攀登冒险家的主题之外,这可能是这次庆祝活动的重要元素。 此外,如果你可以稍微转动相机 - 无人机以获得相对于支撑结构的绳索更好的对称性,它会给图像带来更强烈的感知。

再次祝贺出版,最重要的是,照片。

 

问候

 

Slawomir Kowalczyk - SC。

Your opinion is very good, thank you so much.

Cicek Kiral CREW 
2 years ago — Senior critic

Hello, Xiao Ping

Welcome to our forum. I agree with my colleague in that the flags are really crucial to the composition. Apart from that I think that the image deserved it's award. Congratulations....Cicek Kiral

Xiao Ping PRO
2 years ago
Cicek 基拉尔 船员

Hello, Xiao Ping

欢迎来到我们的论坛。 我同意我同事的观点,即旗帜对于构图非常重要。 除此之外,我认为这张照片值得获奖。 恭喜....Cicek Kiral

Thank you for your comments. This is another picture. Please provide your suggestions. Thank you.

 

Xiao Ping PRO
2 years ago
Slawomir Kowalczyk 船员

Hello Xiao,

 

感谢您将照片上传到本论坛。

不仅要祝贺照片的发布,还要祝贺照片获奖!

尽管如此,让我提出一些可能在下一帧中考虑的观察结果。

我对剪下的旗帜感到有点遗憾,除了攀登冒险家的主题之外,这可能是这次庆祝活动的重要元素。 此外,如果你可以稍微转动相机 - 无人机以获得相对于支撑结构的绳索更好的对称性,它会给图像带来更强烈的感知。

再次祝贺出版,最重要的是,照片。

 

问候

 

Slawomir Kowalczyk - SC。

Thank you for your comment. This is another photo. Please provide your suggestions. Thank you.

 

Xiao Ping PRO
2 years ago
Cicek 基拉尔 船员

Hello, Xiao Ping

欢迎来到我们的论坛。 我同意我同事的观点,即旗帜对于构图非常重要。 除此之外,我认为这张照片值得获奖。 恭喜....Cicek Kiral

Thank you for your comments. Here are two other pictures. Which one do you think is better? Please provide your suggestions, thank you.

 



Xiao Ping PRO
2 years ago
Slawomir Kowalczyk 船员

Hello Xiao,

 

感谢您将照片上传到本论坛。

不仅要祝贺照片的发布,还要祝贺照片获奖!

尽管如此,让我提出一些可能在下一帧中考虑的观察结果。

我对剪下的旗帜感到有点遗憾,除了攀登冒险家的主题之外,这可能是这次庆祝活动的重要元素。 此外,如果你可以稍微转动相机 - 无人机以获得相对于支撑结构的绳索更好的对称性,它会给图像带来更强烈的感知。

再次祝贺出版,最重要的是,照片。

 

问候

 

Slawomir Kowalczyk - SC。

Thank you for your comments. Here are two other pictures. Which one do you think is better? Please provide your suggestions, thank you.

 

 

Cicek Kiral CREW 
2 years ago — Senior critic
Xiao Ping PRO
Cicek 基拉尔 船员

Hello, Xiao Ping

欢迎来到我们的论坛。 我同意我同事的观点,即旗帜对于构图非常重要。 除此之外,我认为这张照片值得获奖。 恭喜....Cicek Kiral

Thank you for your comments. Here are two other pictures. Which one do you think is better? Please provide your suggestions, thank you.

 



Hi, I like the first more.

Cicek Kiral CREW 
2 years ago — Senior critic
Xiao Ping PRO
Cicek 基拉尔 船员

Hello, Xiao Ping

欢迎来到我们的论坛。 我同意我同事的观点,即旗帜对于构图非常重要。 除此之外,我认为这张照片值得获奖。 恭喜....Cicek Kiral

Thank you for your comments. Here are two other pictures. Which one do you think is better? Please provide your suggestions, thank you.

 



Hi, I like the first more.

Theo Luycx PRO
2 years ago

Xiao,

I have another suggestion.  The ladder of knives is your goal for this composition together with the great area with people.  My suggestion is choose for your goal the vertical , your goal and there remains enough people around to make it impressive. Only another suggestion. Theo-senior critic.

 

 

 

Edited: 2 years ago by Theo Luycx