I saw that the main critic points of my picture Autumn Leaf the "extreme edited" eyes were. many people thought the same, but i promiss, that her eyes are pretty extreme. here is one original photo
http://home.fotocommunity.de/svenp/index.php?id=1034010&d=14712044
I hope you mind that in your decision.
the other thing is, that i took the photo with a softbox, so the skin got pretty soft.
thx

ps. now i see the light reflexion in the middle of her lips, too. looks like its a bit swollen.