niloofar mozafarian 7 months ago

wow i love her smile!!!nice.

vida berry al aden 10 months ago

nice potraiture.....

Taufik Zamzami 1 year ago

Mantap tone dan kontrasnya ...

m salim bhayangkara 1 year ago

kerennnn bgt nih....nice potrait

zafertekin 2 years ago

Very nice...

Iulian Mofteescu 2 years ago

Memorable portrait. I like it!

Soulmyst 2 years ago

Extremely memorable and powerful portrait - love the ecstatic smile and her old wrinkled face is so precious! ^_^

Roual 2 years ago

Great!

Bayu Sahaja 2 years ago

Great shot...

nickodarwis 2 years ago

thank all coment here...
1. for enjoy my work :)
2. and for critique The background editing is bad...not black pure. and very scary if you put -150 in ps hehehehe


when i take shoot this foto, 10 april 2010 in bali
http://nickodarwis.multiply.com/journal/item/53

when editing...priority on person, making bw and silver effect on her skin...
the mood is the good part of my image.
unfinish work ?...tx for telling me, some friend here, about background editing.

after that short edit time...i the same day, i'm joint be new member in 1X.com
this is the first upload...and success to publish.

base on critique in my background editing

then i read "ABOUT" rules in 1x.com
this 1x.com note :..........

member : "I have improved a photo. Can I upload it again?
1X.Com : "If you've made major improvements to a photo, or if the screeners have asked you to fix something, you can upload the same photo again. Go to "Uploaded photos" in your account, click on the image you want to resubmit and then click on the "Upload an improved version" button. In case you reupload an already published image and it's approved, unique views, favorites, comments and albums will be saved."

why i do not have the note form the screeners ?


base on that rules...
NOW I'M FINISH MY SECOND EDIT...priority to bacground pure black
i'm ready to "Upload an improved version".
how i can get it ?


thank's 1X.com
& sorry my english is bad....wkwkwkwk :)

Ali Morshedlou 2 years ago

Interesting shot...

Photonook 2 years ago

I love it!!! That smile is one in a million.

Slavomir M. 2 years ago

great

Thaib Chaidar 2 years ago

maknyuss bw nya om...

angga bhaskara 2 years ago

cakep pisan bang BW nya.. salut

sedayucel 2 years ago

Very nice...

calliope8muse 2 years ago

ok maybe there was too much editing that made the granny look almost plastic, but I was wondering if you could share some tips on how to make this silver like effect on her skin please?

Ludovic Charbonneau 2 years ago

Outch oO
The background editing is ugly.
Sorry

Ingo Dumreicher 2 years ago

I already remarked while screening, that editing is completely overdone. Less is more - i would think about it.

I totaly agree with KPK and KoPi and i am wondering how it could get published...

Please dont take it personally. It's just critic on the picture.

Cheers,
Ingo

Anjas Setiady 2 years ago

Mantap om....

KPK 2 years ago

I have to say that I completely agree with KoPi's remarks. The editing is massively overdone and the visible editing rests at the background simply look ugly. Such a great motiv killed by edting. Sorry for being so direct.

Irwan Gunadi 2 years ago

mantaap bro!
emang sengaja ditonjolin DI-nya?

Patricia 2 years ago

Great expression! Great shot!

KoPi 2 years ago

must be either my monitor or my super eyes, but I see a bg full with editing marks, around the smoke, around her head, lhs border, rhs border. It is also way too bright, and way oversharpened. So I opened it up in PS. needed to slide the brightness slider all the way to the left (-150 !) to make the bg editing marks go away and bring the overcontrasting, oversharpening and overly bright areas more or less to acceptable levels.
fab moment captured though.

Putu Sudiarta 2 years ago

Great capture, love it

Monique 2 years ago

haha--totally twisted.
great shot,

Ralf Stelander 2 years ago

Great shot!

Cie Shin 2 years ago

very nice my friend....

Lumy 2 years ago

great !!!!!

A.madestra. W 2 years ago

nice expression....good Job Om bro :D

dedy tiyoso photoworks 2 years ago

keren bener ..dramatis om nicodarwis...:D:D:D

omid sariri 2 years ago

Thanks

John Oo 2 years ago

This portrait reminds me of my grandmother that I never had an opportunity to take a picture of. Great capture.

willem 2 years ago

Very,very well done...!!!

Pierre Pageau 2 years ago

félicitations .

Ellen van Deelen 2 years ago

Just beautiful!

Geir Danielsen 2 years ago

Perfect
well done!

Luciano Caturegli 2 years ago

complimenti

Reinheart Damanik 2 years ago

Kalo mungkin bisa saya bertanya sedikit, kok sepertinya pada bagian hitam background terdapat banyak coret-coret yg belum dibersihkan, asapnya seperti membentuk shadow yg menurut saya agak sedikit ganjil, dan proses penajaman mengakibatkan garis / fring pada setiap edge...

Tapi dari sisi ekspresi, n lighting menarik...

Torsten Wolf 2 years ago

Too good to be real - a truly Indonesian shot!

Wings 2 years ago

Gee that's a torch for you . nice light, the picture captures all the detail and more. way to go

ilhan kemal 2 years ago

perfect exc work,,

torkel fenre 2 years ago

great work!!

Edmondo 2 years ago

FANTASTIC shot..